The Surprise


by Caned1 <Caned1@excite.com>

Mark was cross. He always went to straight to town after college on Fridays. He had especially been looking forward to it this week because he had arranged to meet Julie. After weeks of asking her he had finally made the breakthrough. The best looking girl at college had agreed to go out with him. His mates would green with envy when they found out. At least they would have been if the bus had turned up!

Jimmy had stood at the bus shelter for nearly an hour before resigning himself to the fact that it just wasn't coming. It was not an unusual occurrence in this quiet country backwater. Since the old bus company had been bought out six months ago the service had gone from bad to worse. With a resignation that his one chance of happiness with Julie had probably been blown, Mark walked slowly back home.

On reaching the remote cottage, it was very obvious even from the bottom of the lane that his brother was already home. Music blared loudly from the cottage. Jimmy was sixteen, two years younger than his brother, and like most younger brothers a real pain in the arse! Jimmy had always seemed to get away with much more than Mark ever had, he had always got better school results than Mark without even trying, was really good at sports, was taller, better looking..........and so the list went on!

Unusually, the back door to the cottage was locked when Mark tried the latch, so he had to use his key. He grabbed a can of coke, fixed himself a sandwich and headed upstairs. Half way up the stairs a new sound could be heard faintly above din of the rock music. The sound was strangely familiar though he couldn't quite put his finger on where he had heard it before. Jimmy's bedroom door was slightly ajar. As Mark approached the door the sound became clearer.

THWACK! Followed by a grunt and a low soft moan.

THWACK! followed again by a long moan

Realisation suddenly dawned, although he hadn't heard that sound for some years it was unmistakeable.

THWACK! ooooharghhhh!

Someone was getting their arse paddled! Hard!

THWACK! ooooooow!

Mark crept to the door and peered furtively through the narrow gap. What he saw nearly made his eyes pop out of his head. He closed them, opened them again and pinched himself a couple of times just to make sure he wasn't dreaming. His brother was kneeling on all fours in the middle of the bed, completely naked. In his hand he held a large wooden paddle that he was using to mercilessly beat his own arse cheeks.

THWACK! first the left cheek. THWACK! then the right.

After each impact a gasp and a moan of pain. He was not holding back. Mark winced at each stroke, realising how painful it must be. He had been paddled by dad a few times when he was younger, and could still recall the stinging in his backside, but that was nothing compared to the thrashing Jimmy was giving himself.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

As he gazed on, savouring the sight before him. He noted how fine and athletic his brother's body had become. The droplets of sweat made his torso glisten as the well defined muscles rippled. The tanned upper body contrasted sharply with the smooth milky white skin normally covered by his shorts. But the most amazing thing of all was the colour of his buttocks. They literally glowed, a deep bright red.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

As Jimmy adjusted his position slightly Mark also saw what had remained hidden from him for several years. Between Jimmy's legs swayed his huge manhood. Even as a boy Jimmy's dick had always out measured his older brothers, but now the difference was astonishing.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

It must have been a full nine inches in length with a width to match and it wasn't even fully erect. Mark had always been jealous of the bulge in his brothers underpants but never more so than as he looked on it at this moment.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

With every fresh strike of the paddle Jimmy's dick jerked forwards with the sheer force of the impact on his rear. It jiggled and danced wildly in time to the beating. Every few strokes he would reach down between his legs and give the massive organ a couple of wild tugs. Not a gentle masturbation, but a rough painful yank, almost as if trying to pull it off completely. As it stiffened in response he would then give his dick a couple of hard stinging slaps setting it rocking wildly from side to side. Then he would again return his attention to his behind.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

From his hidden vantage point Mark suddenly realised that the incredible sight before him had caused his own dick to swell considerably within the confines of his tight jeans and it was rapidly becoming very uncomfortable. As he undid the zipper to gain some relief his dick sprung out, as stiff as a board. As he watched on, he began to gently massage it imagining how he would feel if it was his own arse recieving the thrashing.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

A sudden change in the tempo of the paddling brought Mark quickly back to the reality of the sight before him.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

Jimmy was now kneeling upright, using one hand to continuously administer the beating, and the other to jerk wildly at his manhood. The increased attention paid off as his dick stiffened and grew to even greater proportions.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

Jimmy's hand was now passing rapidly up and down over the full length of his erection as if to emphasise the sheer enormity of it. The tape player fell silent as the tapeabruptly ended, but Jimmy was far too preoccupied to notice.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! THWACK! aaaaaarrrrrrhhhhhhhhhh! Yeesss!

With a sudden loud shout of triumph he dropped the paddle to the bed, grasped the head of his dick in both hands and sprayed semen high into the air in a massive uncontrolled orgasm, moaning loudly with pleasure and relief as each wad of sperm shot forth. The ejaculation seemed to last for ages. Finally, having milked the last few drops from his slowly shrinking dick he collapsed on the bed rubbing his very sore arse cheeks, and gasping for breath.

Mark, realising that the show was now ended, quickly stuffed his unsatisfied organ back into his trousers and crept as quickly and as quietly as he could back downstairs.

Going straight to the back door, he opened it, and then slammed it again as loudly as he could, at the same time yelling "Anyone home".

Mark smiled to himself at the sudden flurry of activity from upstairs, there was a heavy thump, something fell to the floor with a crash. Two minutes later Jimmy descended the stairs fully dressed, his face still flustered and red.

He headed straight for the back door. "I thought you were going into town?" he muttered as he passed, trying hard to disguise his rapid breathing.

"I was, the bus didn't turn up" Mark said matter-of -factly "Are you going out somewhere?"

"Yeah!" he said without turning round "I'm going round to Jacks house, tell mum I'll be back about eight" With that he left.

Mark watched him disappear down the lane. He noted with a smile that Jimmy seemed to be walking rather slowly and painfully. He glanced at the clock. He still had a good hour and a half before mum would return from work. There was a stirring in his genitals that definitely needed taking care of. Slipping quickly up to Jimmy's room he stood and gazed around, looking for any obvious hiding place. Then he suddenly remembered the loose floorboard in the cupboard. This had originally been Marks room, and as a young boy he remembered that he used to stash anything he wanted to remain undiscovered beneath this board. Opening the cupboard he pulled back the loose carpet and prised up the two-foot section of board. Bingo! Beneath the board lay the very same paddle that had so recently been put to such energetic use.

Going over to the mirror Mark released his belt and watched his jeans fall to the floor. His modest five-incher was already pointing skywards. Mimicking the treatment his brother had earlier given his own organ, he gave it a couple of sharp painful slaps. He let out an involuntary yelp at the sudden pain, but was surprised to see that instead of diminishing, his erection actually increased. Running his hands over the smooth surface of the heavy paddle, he dropped to his knees, took a couple of deep breaths, and bent forward....................

To be continued................maybe!


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